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A world without you is so hollow
Its just too much for me to swallow
How could you leave me here alone?
My reaction you should have known

All I do is damage it seems
Destroying happiness and dreams
Inside emotions, they teem
Like a blocked up stream
Slowly ripping at the seam

Hope drifting out of reach
I fear the barrier will breach
But everything stays within
Seems the devils inside will win

They all look down upon me
My devastation they can't see
They tell me to let it all go
But how can I do what I don't know?

I feel like I'm falling into a pit
My sorrows pulling me down
Sucking energy from my bones
And leaving me deep to drown

They tell me to just let it go
But how can I do what I don't know?

I sit in this room alone
I'm supposed to do this on my own
But I need you to help me
To unlock it all I need a key

I see you in the distance
The ground crumbles at my feet
As I fall I see your face
And catch those words
             I am with you
                Always and forever


I finally know what is true
You never left, we are together

They tell me to let it go
And now I finally know

As a single tear falls
I finally break the walls
I know I wasn't forgotten
I finally beat the demon
My doubt no longer rules
As my tears gather in pools
I remember as we were
And now I am sure

I will never stop walking
I'll just keep pressing on
I will never give up again
For I now know the truth

No matter what happens
We will be together
Always and forever

They told me to let it go
I finally let it flow
I wrote this for a contest on the theme "let it go" in the group :iconallpoetryisgolden:

I think of this as more of a song than a poem
You may recognise some of the lines, I stole them from my other poems because they fit perfectly :meow:  I am happy with how this came out :la:

I think I should do a giant mash of all my poems, that would be fun and challenging to make them all flow together.
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SilverJADEWolf Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Wow so amazing... you really did synchronize with the song seamlessly.  This poem is a winner!Edward Elric (I got this) [V1]   It truly is amazing, I love this poem! Racing Girl Emoji (Ehehe) [V4] 
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconexplodelaplz:
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SilverJADEWolf Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Student General Artist
Racing Girl Emoji (Please forgive me) [V3] Nooooo don't die...
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
STILL ALIVE AND AWESOME Fool Emoji-47 (Star) [V5] 
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SilverJADEWolf Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Suuuuurrreeeee....
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful poem you came up with!
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
It's an interesting theme. And it came out great :)
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Sapphira-Adi Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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